Syrupmasterz's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Walking Around]

Years of my brother sneaking up behind me with a Skull Mask has imposed a life's worth of paranoia when I walk around. I can relate to this to quite a degree. :P

Pretty dang good, and it loops well!
Only thing I might change is have the background change from scary to calm over a longer period of time, with you calming down slower as well. Otherwise it's pretty slick.

Keep it up dude!

[Drawing Prompt 17 (2021)]

Alright...I've waited a few days...and no one has addressed the elephant in the room...
Why are there bones and a skull on the bottom right? :P

[Blue with Yo-Yo (2020)]

Yo! This looks good Yo! :P

I like the smear frame of the yo-yo jumping up, and I'd say overall you have a nice smooth motion with the hand. The one thing that sticks out to me is the arm with the hand in the pocket. Right around the elbow joint the upper kind of jerks around a little bit. Since it's not being used and it's being held in place practically, the cloth of the shirt would be in a smoother motion going forward and back with the body; much like the other arm.

Nothing that couldn't be fixed easily enough though, so keep at it and you'll keep improving. :)

Oretal responds:

Thank you for the advice yo! I really appreciate it.

Ive noticed the jerkiness of the arm before and next time I’ll try to make things less jerky and more smooth in more areas rather than one.

I’m thankful for your message!

[Caci & Paci]

They might look prickly, but they're actually a swell bunch. :P

DoodlingHitman responds:

they gon prick yer booty!

[Outside the Laundromat]

'Round here in Vancouver we have hills that are literally this steep near the Fraiser River, this actually kinda looks like a certain part of town now that I think about it. :P

The colored lighting did this piece some good, and I like how the all the different stuff jutting out of the buildings so it doesn't look like a plain flat wall. Keep it up!

BudderDaze responds:

I appreciate your words =w= thank you

[Cursed Character Design]

That ain't cursed! That's just Muppets mixed in with a little bit of anime. :P

Nice linework and good colors too!

[Finishing blow]

Those sunglasses saved that thug's life, since they were disintegrated by that mean left-hook. Who knows how bad the damage would have been if he wasn't wearing them?

Nice fluid stuff! Diggin' the snow shading to get across how lumpy and packed it is. Characters also have good footwork during their fight, and I like that struggle the thug did to maintain balance at the end of the counter he received.

All in all a nice scrap with nicely detailed characters. Keep it up!

Ioruko responds:

Thanks, I appreciate all the things you noticed about my animation, makes me feel happy I was able to portray the action accordingly!

[Project OC]

I feel bad for the mysterious entity about to be shot by that shotgun, either for the 3rd or 1st time, depending on how vigilantly she reloads.

Nice work dude!
Anatomically speaking everything seems to be in good order, and while I was going to saw that your lineart was looking too thin on her hand that was tossing the shells, after I enlarged the image to fullsize I saw that you were having the the lineart get thinner the further away it was from the camera.
Cloth crumples are also looking good, so the only thing looking slightly off is the shotgun stock, since it looks like it's slightly bent in regards to the nozzle and base of the shotgun. But hey, guns are always tricky to draw perfectly. haha

Keep it up!

Nonochton responds:

Amazing, thank you.

[POSITIVE BOT]

Yeah sure he'll make you happy, but he gets depression juice everywhere after he does it. :/
Technology isn't quite there yet, but I'm glad they're still trying.

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In all seriousness, neat yet spooky pic ya got here!
The way you only have the background as a small square under him/her/it makes this whole image look like a trading card on a white table, my only real complaint is that the frontmost foot is forming a small tangent at the bottom of the image. Having the green foot be just a little bit over the black border or slightly angled so more of the heel is on the grass would fix this (very) minor issue, other than that, good work. :)

[Happy Birthday!]

Sniping's a good job mate. :)