Syrupmasterz's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hardly Workin - NGR Day 25]

I like the dynamic angle you chose, and you really captured the essence of the characters in just one drawing. :P

[Indiana Mango]

Nice work dude!
You picked a lively pose and I'm diggin' your colour choices. The glossy lobster claws next to the desert sky and sand makes for some cool contrast.

I also like the subtle look of confusion, like he isn't quite sure the whip is going to help him with archeology. :P

Keep it up!

[Division Street | 100th Drawing on NG]

The blank expression on this guy makes me think that he was looking for Multiplication Avenue and got lost somewhere along the way. :P

Good stuff! Your astronaut is cemented as the focal point by having brighter and more saturated colours than the non-astronaut civilians wearing beige and brown clothing. That said, I notice one tiny omission that was likely accidental.

The girl closest to the camera has lip definition, but Ece has a smooth line from the bottom of his nose to his chin. Just a little something to add a tiny bit of depth to the bottom of his face is all he needs to show he has lips at that angle, otherwise this is a fine piece.

Keep it up! :D

TheDyingSun responds:

The lip thing was an accidental omission >.<

I was in the middle of adding it and it looked weird so I stopped and I forgot to go back to add it in! I might update that depending on how it looks.

Otherwise, thank you so much! :>

[TheMewx Comic #54 'Dead Asleep!']

Fall asleep longer than 6 hours and suddenly you're dead in Mewx' eyes. :P

Nice work dude!
Aside from the funny funeral outfits and other things that made this comic fun to read, you did a nice job with the blanket crumples. A+ for effort. haha

Keep it up! :D

[Cool Monkey Summer: Surfin' Monkey]

Gnarly dude! :D
(the good kind of gnarly, of course)

[Ｍａｓｓｉｖｅ Ｖｉｂｅ | Just Vibin']

If she's inside a cool crystal ball, then some highlights/shines on one side of the orb to make it seem more round would make it a tiny bit fancier. If she's standing in front of a circular window, maybe some slight edge around the outside of the window frame to give it some distinction from the purple from the pink glass.

If it is neither of these things, then the only thing I'd mention is to push the darkness of the dark blues so it contrasts a bit heavier with the lighter blues. :P

Keep up the good work!

[Super Wazzaldorp Racing]

Getting the Platinum Time Relic on Wazzledorp Arena is a nightmare, but unlocking all the characters afterwards is worth it. :P

[SAHARA]

The Sun can't get ya if you're hiding behind bandages. Top-tier strats. :P

[The man turns]

"The world turns, and so do we."

Looks good! Just watch that volume control. If the head gets bigger since he's getting closer to the camera, so would the rest of the body.

[pork bun badoogle]

The small pork bun is for now, the other thee giant ones are for later.

Nice color combo! I had mentioned that already on Discord, but taking a deeper look at this for the sake of reviewing, I notice that you have a nice strong light source coming from the right side of the image, and it casts some good light on your Moth Girl here.

Looking at the goofy cat and the pork bun, I'd say that they might also be getting a bit more of a shine like the girl's sweater and skirt are. Just a highlight on the right hand side would probably about do it and still keep the general lighting scheme you were going for, nothing major. :P

That said, I really do enjoy the sparkles and the look of fascination on the cat, like it'd been dreaming of this day for months. haha

Keep up the good work!

Oddlem responds:

OOOOOH you're totally right!! I couldn't figure out how to get the background to contrast against her, I shouldn't have underestimated the power of highlights!! thank you very much, u tha homie!!