Syrupmasterz's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Izzy Undead]

Cool desaturated colour pallet you're using, meshes wells with the sketchy lineart style in a way that looks like it was drawn and coloured on paper. :)

[Nejire Hado]

Dayum son! Your lineart skills are getting crazy good!
You still using Flash to get those nice clean lines, or are you using Photoshop? :)

bocodamondo responds:

yeah this is done in flash,
glad you like it ^^

[Spyro Reignited Trilogy - Elora & Bianca]

(Dragon Pops his head up between them)
"Dragons first."

[The Master]

Calling it now, he's wearing stilts and is as small as Kibbles. :P

[Superverse - Starzan]

Haha, this style is just like the kind of art you see on the sides of arcade machines and pinball cases. :P

Good detail on the muscles and your lineart really made the colours pop out.
Keep it up!

CrockerComics responds:

Thanks. The client wanted it to feel like an animated superhero cartoon.

[Khori 2018]

The hands are a tiny bit janked at the wrist, and the pinkies are a little bit too thick towards the finger tip. You did a great job with the pointing fingers though, they have good flow and good articulation.

The colours all seem to mesh well with one another and the face is very expressive. In terms of shadow and lighting I'd say you did an overall good job, but the shading around her neck is a little bit smudged.

You're gradually getting everything dialed in, so keep up the practice and you'll get closer to mastering the semi-realistic style!

Shishizurui responds:

thanks,with each picture I get closer and closer. i feel like one day i'll just get it all to pop and work at some point hands have always been tricky for me for years they've looked like mangled sausages but they're getting better

I apriciate your criticism and kind words its been an absolute trip getting to this spot i'm currently at and admittedly i know i'm just at the tip of the iceburg

thanks again~

[OG Chicken]

Having conquered the major league circuit, the OG Chicken decided that being a Super Predator was too easy, and sought to evolve into a small herbivorous bird to tests it's skills of predator evasion. Such bravery led to an explosion of new species and massive biodiversity. Truly, a unique and unforgettable champion. :P

[The Yeti]

As mentioned before in that email, I really dig this piece. One thing in particular though that stands out for me is how you added blue shading to his nose and his eyes. It really adds some charm and delight to it.

Great work! :D

[Planet YixHund]

Could use something going on in the foreground maybe, but on the other hand having the background just being those mountains shows the depth.

What's all gonna happen on YixHund?

BlackArabi responds:

YixHund is a Alien Member of my future comic called Crazy Universe, so, you can see what happen on Yix Hund there

[A Rocket In The Room]

Hmm...I think a cool style would be that every time you walk into a new room, the camera centres in on the new room and the other one fades to white. In such a way that each room is centered in the middle of the screen like this.

Regardless, this isn't half bad a just a sample to what you might be cooking up, whatever it might be. :P

Keep it up!

Mikethehunter16 responds:

You are totally read my mind(a wonderful thing) lol, that's sort of what I was thinking too :3
Thank you so much :)