Syrupmasterz's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Neon Sight]

Ah, I really dig this one. You have a real knack for getting shading for lips and noses down pat really nice.

Been trying to get back into drawing detailed faces, and stuff like this shows that a good shadow and shine is really all ya need for good depth. :)

[CRIKEY!]

The guy was a total hype man for nature appreciation, and little me and current me can really respect that. :)

[uh oh spaghettios]

It looks like half the hands are trying to stop the other hands from being creepy, telling them to stop with hand gestures. :P

As always with your bird character, I like how you use lots of red backgrounds and purple objects to have a sort of colour wheel effect goin' on, as well as your real paint smudges effects you use. Creates some really funky stuff (the good kind).

Keep it up!

Oddlem responds:

thank you a whole ton as always, u tha homie!!!!! means a dang lot to me!

[Walking Around]

Years of my brother sneaking up behind me with a Skull Mask has imposed a life's worth of paranoia when I walk around. I can relate to this to quite a degree. :P

Pretty dang good, and it loops well!
Only thing I might change is have the background change from scary to calm over a longer period of time, with you calming down slower as well. Otherwise it's pretty slick.

Keep it up dude!

[Drawing Prompt 17 (2021)]

Alright...I've waited a few days...and no one has addressed the elephant in the room...
Why are there bones and a skull on the bottom right? :P

[Blue with Yo-Yo (2020)]

Yo! This looks good Yo! :P

I like the smear frame of the yo-yo jumping up, and I'd say overall you have a nice smooth motion with the hand. The one thing that sticks out to me is the arm with the hand in the pocket. Right around the elbow joint the upper kind of jerks around a little bit. Since it's not being used and it's being held in place practically, the cloth of the shirt would be in a smoother motion going forward and back with the body; much like the other arm.

Nothing that couldn't be fixed easily enough though, so keep at it and you'll keep improving. :)

Oretal responds:

Thank you for the advice yo! I really appreciate it.

Ive noticed the jerkiness of the arm before and next time I’ll try to make things less jerky and more smooth in more areas rather than one.

I’m thankful for your message!

[Caci & Paci]

They might look prickly, but they're actually a swell bunch. :P

DoodlingHitman responds:

they gon prick yer booty!

[Outside the Laundromat]

'Round here in Vancouver we have hills that are literally this steep near the Fraiser River, this actually kinda looks like a certain part of town now that I think about it. :P

The colored lighting did this piece some good, and I like how the all the different stuff jutting out of the buildings so it doesn't look like a plain flat wall. Keep it up!

BudderDaze responds:

I appreciate your words =w= thank you

[Cursed Character Design]

That ain't cursed! That's just Muppets mixed in with a little bit of anime. :P

Nice linework and good colors too!

[Finishing blow]

Those sunglasses saved that thug's life, since they were disintegrated by that mean left-hook. Who knows how bad the damage would have been if he wasn't wearing them?

Nice fluid stuff! Diggin' the snow shading to get across how lumpy and packed it is. Characters also have good footwork during their fight, and I like that struggle the thug did to maintain balance at the end of the counter he received.

All in all a nice scrap with nicely detailed characters. Keep it up!

Ioruko responds:

Thanks, I appreciate all the things you noticed about my animation, makes me feel happy I was able to portray the action accordingly!