Syrupmasterz's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Worms Hanging!]

He's going to take SOOOOOOOOOO much fall damage! D:

DoodlingHitman responds:

Haha, indeed!

[Power Bomb]

This is a really talented piece of work!
I'm no lighting expert, but I think that the side walk might have shadows similar to the railing wall near the bottom. Again, I'm no expert. :P
Other than that this is excellent. Great work!

[Swimming Worm!]

"Ah whatever, he'll be back next game..." :P
Great work! I'd just suggest adding a few more grass details near where the worms are standing.
Keep it up!

DoodlingHitman responds:

Thanks! :)

Yeah whenever I try to add grass detail it always looks weird. I can basically only do one detail and it's that. If I do more than that it looks.. stupid, lol.

But yeah. I should really practice more on creating backgrounds and stuff like that.

[Super Orange Marsupial]

(TNT starts counting down)
Crash: D:

[Spaced Out]

This is an incredibly cheerful and fun looking piece. :P
The only thing I could point out is on the stars. They have one small speck of yellow on the lineart that seems as if though the colouring has gone past it.
Other than that this piece is spectacular. Great work!

[Archmaester tower concept.2]

This is some really detailed concept work, the fact I can distinguish every single object on the tables shows the amount of work that must have gone into this piece.
As well the perspective and floor details are so bang on it makes it seem like this was a black and white photo of an existing tower! :D
The one thing I will point out that seems a little bit off is staircase #2.
I'm sure it was left like that to simply show that it leads to the other part of the tower, but as it stands it looks super steep and crooked, making for an unsafe work environment for the resident warlock.
Going over and doing a quick fix for staircase #2 so that it doesn't seem quite so steep would make this concept piece pretty much perfect.

Excellent work all around. :P

Flowers10 responds:

Thanks for your comment man^^

[Chaos Warrior]

This is really good!
One thing I would suggest though is to have a few more details for the underside of the cape.
The part of the cape that has flipped to the right shows that the cape has numerous details and shading. Adding some of those details to the back side would make this image even more impressive.
Great work! :P

Nimerion responds:

Thank you very much for your tip :)
Next time i'll pay more attention to details :)

[Warlax]

This put a huge grin on my face, thanks for that. :P

One suggestion I could make would be the lighting on the back of the Snorlax.
The light source seems to be coming from a front-above. All of the shading is consistent with that direction except the back, where it seems like there is another light source.
If that is the case then no problem, but if not then maybe that area could be looked over again.

Great job overall! :D