Syrupmasterz's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Daily Imagination #111 - Snow 1]

I also want snow, so I will favorite snow.

Pretty good! It's always cool to see people mimicking painting styles with digital art, shows a level of artistic understanding that I don't have quite yet. :P

I'm no camera angle expert, but judging by the look of that snow it seems pretty deep. I think that the layer of snow resting on them would be visible from the top of the plateaus, based on the amount...BUT like I said I'm no expert on perspective. Merely a suggestion.

Keep up the great work!

[NYAH!]

The worm got so perturbed it grew a nose. :P

Pretty good for a simple goofy image. Excellent details on the worms helps convey the very important message of 'NYAH!'.

The background is pretty straightforward, although the focus is on the worms themselves. For that I can't really fault you. Should you ever revisit this piece however, it would be a nice touch to add a more elaborate background and some more confused worms.

Keep it up!

DoodlingHitman responds:

Thank you, you sexy person!

Yeah, since I didn't draw since October I kinda just wanted to draw some worms. This took me around 3-4 hours. So I decided not to spend more time on a background.

I should do that more though because I really need to learn how to draw decent backgrounds. I kinda leave those for full comics though.. :p

[Koromon digitiert zu...]

You've come so far in your artistic journey that I can easily mistake this for official art.
I would have definitely bought a poster of this back when I was watching the show all the time as a little kid. :P

Great work with the all the details and attention to light sources, I can easily picture movement from them as a result of the anatomically correct muscles and bones. Someone definitely did their research before getting started.

The only thing I think that could be improved is the bottom row of teeth on Greymon and MetalGreymon. With the current shading the teeth look a little bit too thin. Rounding it out with a thin shadow of some extra light should give it the 3D look the rest of their teeth have. Perhaps even changing the bottom of the tooth to be rounder could work as well. However, I'm not the foremost expert on lighting, so take my advice with a bag of salt.

You're doing great and you've still got plenty of potential. Keep it up Boco!




P.S I dig that 'Hell ya!" expression all of them share. :P

bocodamondo responds:

thank you ^^
yeah i was looking at some shit ton of images for each evolution form to make sure i get it on-model :P
yeah youre probably right about the teeths, when i was drawing them, i wasnt sure how to draw them there.
but thanks for the review, i appreciate it ^^

[Impaled Ahegao]

Some scotch tape and a bit of glue and she'll be good as new. :P

RoRo-Royerboat responds:

That'll do it!

[Fat unicorn]

This kinda seems like something from the 2D Rayman games that have come out recently. :P

Your lighting angles all seem consistent and aside from the unicorn's floating eye (which I'm sure is intentional), everything seems proportionate to the goofy cartoon style you used.

I'm no programmer so I can't help you make a game, but I wish you luck!

HugoVRB responds:

You honor me! As Rayman has one of the coolest styles imo.

I usually add a floating eye to my characters, it adds a level of whathehellness. And thanks! I'm still learning the basics of lighting so I usually have only one or two sources.

And one day I'll make a game! You'll see!
Thanks SyrupMasterz.

[The sisters]

Great job emulating the Don't Starve style! Takes a bit of getting used to but it's fun to use. :P

I can see that you added your own personal twist and added some extra details with Wendy's hair and Abigail's ghostly tail. Makes her seem a lot more other-worldly.

Keep it up!

[Bubblegum]

I can speak from experience, gum + hair = bad. :P

Great work with the anatomy and the soft shadows, I usually have trouble with those.

[Cloud City]

That's a cool effect you use to make your art look like it was made with real paint. :)
I'm diggin' that blue monochromatic colour scheme as well. Keep it up!

[Golem escape]

Be free Golem! Be with your people!

That's quite a bit of detail for just two hours!
The cracks and rock details seem to be unique without repeating all over the golem, so it shows you were paying attention even under time pressure.

Keep it up! :)

cocolongo responds:

Thank you man.

[Hexafusion]

Haha, Wii Fit Avatar. :P

Your anatomy has gotten very good over time, it's also nice to see you experimenting with more action-y poses as well. Keep it up!

bocodamondo responds:

thanks ^^, yeah im trying to do more dynamic poses lately