Syrupmasterz's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[MINECRAFT ADVENTURES EP:5]

Taking the diamonds taught Tiltro, but who teaches the Creeper!?

[No milk?]

Some milk would've added some Defense Points to his bones. lol

[Thief 8 💎🏃‍♀️🏃‍♂️💨💨]

He stops her from stealing the Emerald, but then gets it broken...
So long story short, his first half-victory in a while. :P

[The Anniversary Of Pizza Tower]

Simple and goofy, but it got a good chuckle out of me. :P

[Silkworm Infestation]

A nice toon and the rotoscoping was certainly one of your most ambitious moments of animation yet!

Though I gotta say, having Mewx with a flamethrower in the video icon absolutely gives away the punchline for anyone that clicks on the video. So even though I didn't know about your silk-worm story, I pretty much knew what was coming.

Also would have been nice to see some flames come out of the flamethrower nozzle before the video cuts to black with the noises.

A solid effort, but nothing that can't be fixed. Keep it up dude!

7.25 / 10 - 7.5/10 with a fixed icon

[The Munch of 87]

Man I'm terrible at this food review. I keep dying at the last section.

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You're gettin' good at doing fluid animation and then mixing it with snappy pose changes for comedy, I can tell you've been keeping up your training dude!
The background from behind the car was a little on the simple side, but I think that's also part of the joke that Freddy just drove so far into the middle of nowhere he doesn't even remember what fast food place he went to. :P

Tiltro responds:

A bears gotta eat.

[(Short) Skye's Move]

Good to see you got it done, but the project just needs some more meat on it's bones. :)

You attempted some walking with Skye and it turned out alright!
Some poses are better, but some poses are a bit janky and the audio is hard to make out.
A step forwards, step backwards kinda situation.

The colouring is better since it's consistently digitally colored instead of half hastily sharpee'd and then scanned drawings, and half digital. Makes it seem like a more whole piece.
There aren't as many frames as there could have been as well, but you met your deadline, so good work.
With revised audio for clarity sake, I'd say the score would be higher, though this project isn't unsalvageable.

We know more about the characters since you talk about them with the gang, but with a 20 second short, brief audio is important so the audience can know what's going on. And of course, if there was a struggle happening on the video feed that showed ULA's communicator get knocked away and left behind, it would make the held reveal shot make a lot more sense.

Same with Skye entering a battle stance as opposed to blinking on screen. Animation in an animation is always a good thing, even with a short sequence.
I've seen you animate them, so once you manage to upgrade this project, it'll be the better for it.

Keep up the training and good luck. :)

[Friday The 13th]

With the nonsense that Jason has still survived, he might be able to pull himself back together, but I think the camp counsellors are safe at least until next Friday The 13th after that. :P

[Joust My Luck]

Whoa! Top notch sound design mixed in with the HorseFolder charm.
You're gettin' pretty good at frame-by-frame too!

Only real sequences that could use the tiniest bit of touching up lineart wise was with the close-ups of the audience and when Sammy's Bird was pecking Rodney's hair.

Otherwise, the whole toon as a whole is a fun time.
I too would like to win a Victory Ham someday. :P

Great work! Keep it up!

[Hank Is In The Walls...]

Honestly, I think Hank being in the walls keeps the Grunts safer than him being out in the hallways, if all the other Madness videos are any indication. :P

Pretty good overall! Just a few instances where the lip sync/head bobbles has Hank's head sinks past his torso while he's talking. If fixable, I don't think there's much else to point out for fixes.

Good work!

MsidTheTired responds:

OOOH MAH GAAAD!! Someone actually gave me so actual criticism for once? :O

Dang, I appreciate it! :D
I didn't really thought it looked bad so I didn't bother, but yeah, if I want to I could pretty easily fix Hank's bobbing, just need to move the graph editor a little on the x rotations aaaand it's done.

Also, true, the Grunts may be safer while Hank is in the walls, but... do you really think his plan would be to *stay* in them? :)