Syrupmasterz's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[PokeDeath 3 Teaser]

Silly Graveler, I can see through your disguise. :P
...also get hype.

[Speed Sculpt Episode 5]

Fully rendered and given lighting in 3 hours?
Not bad, not bad at all. :P

[Glass and lip bite]

This is a pretty good attempt at semi-realism! You were able to get quite a bit of detail and musculature within the shading, and aside from a few tiny areas that don't have any paint, I'd say there aren't any real mistakes.

It's always cool seeing stylized realism, so keep pushing yourself further with your future experiments. :)

[Sucy]

Great job with the lighting man!

[Bioshock: Little Sisters]

" Also, plz ignore my awful lineart, idk what I'm doing¯\_(ツ)_/¯ "

As far as sketchy line arts go, I wouldn't worry too much.
Just keep practicing and your lines will become more controlled if that's what you are after. 'Cuz hey! There is no rule against having a stylistic line choice the one you just used. :P

The cloth and wall details are good, and you emulated the spooky pale skin shading from the game pretty well. Only thing I can suggest looking into more reference with is the floor boards.
A few of the smudges make the perspective seem a little bit flat, but other than that I can't think of anything else to point out.

Don't beat yourself up too much. :P
Keep up the great work!

lilotterqueen responds:

Thankyou so much! I'll try to work on all the stuff you mentioned, thanks for the advice~

[Day #187 - Isaac Clarke]

So minimalist, yet distinct...goes to show that both you and the original developers knew what they were doing.

Keep it up!

[Genedrive Zora vs Elara]

A failure? How could this possibly be a failure?

Your characters are well drawn and have been given good poses; as well you have consistent lighting for both of them in regards to the street lamp above.

The only thing missing would be the top of the window ledges, as the perspective as it stands would show a small amount of the concrete it is fastened to if you are looking up at it.

If you learned something, then a piece of art can't be a failure. :)
Don't give up!

[Yoga Addict]

Find yourself a programmer and get cracking my dude. :P

[Team Aoi IV]

All other details aside, their lips are extremely well defined. :)
Nice work!

[Playing Cards]

I have a mini card set because my brother got them from a school Secret Santa one year...AS WELL I can say that I like the camera angle and composition in this particular comic. :P

DoodlingHitman responds:

That's neato. I haven't played an actual game with these cards yet however. Seems funny though. And yeah, I took several pictures because it was kinda hard to get it right. I needed to make the focus go somewhere, and best place to do so seemed to be the cards at the front. Because objects further away need to seem blurry.

I'm glad you like it, Syrup! :]