Syrupmasterz's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Playing Cards]

I have a mini card set because my brother got them from a school Secret Santa one year...AS WELL I can say that I like the camera angle and composition in this particular comic. :P

DoodlingHitman responds:

That's neato. I haven't played an actual game with these cards yet however. Seems funny though. And yeah, I took several pictures because it was kinda hard to get it right. I needed to make the focus go somewhere, and best place to do so seemed to be the cards at the front. Because objects further away need to seem blurry.

I'm glad you like it, Syrup! :]

[Gwendy & Ghost Halloween Wallpaper]

Ghost's tail always reminds me of the snake from Beetlejuice. :P

This kind of drawing summons forth tons of Halloween memories with the art style alone. I have no idea what to call the art style, but from the late 90s to the early 2000s there was a bunch of bubbly and spooky art books, as well as shows that had this kind of illustration in them.

Glad to see you bringing about a resurgence, I'm sure you could be a great children's author someday. :)

[Kathleen]

Just four shades of blue and you made that mountain look amazing!
I could learn a thing or two from looking at this. :P

Keep it up man!

[Shinto Shrine]

Certainly not the most handicap-accessible shrine out there...:P

You did a wonderful job with the rock and water details, and the great attention to lighting effects brought the whole thing to life. People working to create 3D works from this image would have no problem trying to figure out exactly what you wanted.

Awesome job!

Cope2K responds:

Haha yeah I need to add a ramp in there or something :D

Glad this would translate to 3D with ease tho! Thanks for the comment!

[a stain?!]

I hate spilling stuff on my clothes...nothing but regret for the rest of the day...lol

You did a great job with the anatomy (although I think the right arm is a little bit too short, but I'm no anatomy expert) and gave her a good pose. At the same time though the background is pretty barebones.

I'm almost 100% sure that was the intention seeing as this is a character centric art piece, but adding a background and or fully drawn ledge would definitely add to the picture as a whole.

All that said this is a pretty cool drawing. Keep it up Boco! :P

bocodamondo responds:

yeah i know i fucked up the arm, i obviously got problems with foreshortening ^^
i didnt add background more for time problems, didnt had the time to put all that effort into a quick drawing like this

[Miko Says - Ghostbusters (2016)]

Like you said it yourself in the description, good front on poses, but twisting her head and torso in different panels will make everything more unique and varied. :P

Keep it up!

[Communist Mewx]

Mostly a silly image made for fun, but I think with some tinkering and repositioning of the art this could be a lot more impressive. :)

You can make the image a bit bigger so it'll give you more space to work with, and from there you can add some shading and other details to your character without them seeming cluttered.

As well with a bigger size to work with, you can shrink the cane and sickle so that they'll be fully visible within the drawing. As it stands the character is mostly blocking everything in the background and just looks evil. If you shrink the symbol you also give yourself the opportunity to add an eerie background, a la Red Dawn or something. :P

I've seen your shading in the Mewx videos, and if you applied it here it would make for some enjoyable viewing. So keep up the improvement and the quality will increase in no time. :)

[Chubby Mermaid]

As long as you're healthy and happy, weight doesn't really matter at all. :)

Great work getting the ocean lights to contour around the body, dynamic lighting from multiple sources always takes me forever to figure out. :P

[Galaxy Glasses]

Disco Inferno started being played by a band while I was waiting in line at a park barbeque.
It was pretty fitting music as I slowly started to burst into flames. @_@

Maybe you drew the stars too big if the space drawing didn't cool you down. :P