Syrupmasterz's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[arrrgg]

It's goofy but I like it. :P

[Tory Low Poly 3D Model]

Coming to the PS1 this Fall! :P

[dino rider]

First off, I love that dino's face and this paint type style you're using. :P

I think that the Cliff Dino's shadow is too harsh compared to the rest of the shadows, which come in a bit more gradually and are not quite as dark.

Having the (screen) left side of the Dino's cheek and the cliff he's leaning on more lit by sunlight would make it so less details are hidden, as well they'd act as nice highlights and would still make the Dino look mysterious.

Another thing is that I think the Dino Rider's hat is too close in colour to the cliff at the top, which makes the hat is making a tangent. Making the top of the cliff slightly darker should fix this though.

Other than that, this is great!
Keep it up my friend. :P

[Ashley Graham]

Aside from questioning her decision to run through the spike corridor and then lean onto an OBVIOUSLY trapped wall, I thought she was a fun character. :P
She never really got on my nerves.

10/10, would help.

[Icey Landscape Redraw]

That's some substantial improvement!
With the image scaled down to fit onto the page the 2nd version almost looks photo realistic! :D

I really like the colorfulness of the first version, but I also really enjoy the contrast of the warm sunset and the cool snow of the second version. Althout I'd saw that the 2nd version has better composition and the little bear benefits from being bigger and getting more details.

Keep it up! :)

GavinWynford responds:

Awesome feedback thank you so much! Glad you think so:)

[Dorian's]

Not bad!
Do you draw shadows and highlights in flat colours and then blur them to get the colour transitions you want? Or do you use a different technique?

Just asking 'cuz I like the glowy effect you've got going on here. :P

dogdoujin responds:

Thanks! I used a few different layers here, some shading was done in flats and others were done with an airbrush/blur tool to make it look a little foggy.

[Pippi Longstocking]

The tree that always magically had food in it made me slightly jealous while watching the show. :P

On a side note, I like the shading and highlights you used to make the base colours pop out.

[Crystal Kneecapp]

Cave Of The Cyrstal Knee-monchers. :P

In terms of postitioning and composition this looks super good, however one thing kinda stands out to me. (Keeping in mind I'm no expert on anatomy or anything, or what style you're goin' for...) Her legs just seem a wee-bit too long in relation to her torso and head.

Other than that, this is a fine piece you got going on here.
Keep it up! :D

Rocktopus64 responds:

Thank you very much!

Colleen is a really tall girl (she's 6 feet tall), and really skinny. Though thank you for the feedback; I'll make note of it for next time.

[orotmik]

With spooky teethed creatures I'd always imagined that biting the tongue would be WAY more common. Yeah sure you're going eat easier, but that's a dual-edged sword man. :P

...On an actually relevant to this art piece note, nice work with the pose that you were able to get all of the limbs into the clear for a good silhouette. As well I like your use of lighting and shadows, helps to make the spooky eye spookier. haha

Keep it up!

[[42] These Happy Days]

Come August I'll be begging for the cold embrace of Winter, Canadians don't do well in the heat...@_@

On an actually artistically relevant to this art piece note, really diggin' your wispy clouds at the top corners and the fade from the blue colours at the forefront to the pinkish purples towards the horizon. : D

Precipitation24 responds:

Thank you!!