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Syrupmasterz

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Not bad, I can see improvement in your line work and colouring.
I would just suggest making Maxie's wrist a tiny bit bigger, as it looks a little bit small when compared to the rest of his body.
As well when using motion tweens, there is a way to have them come to a smooth stop as opposed to halting immediately.
Near the tween menu, looking for the menu with 'ease'.
-Having it ease in means that it will move slow at first, then accelerate quickly.
-Having it ease out means that the tween will start fast, then slow down before the tween ends.

Hope this advice will prove useful. :)
Good work man!

Storyboarding and voice acting was very well done and would make for an awesome video if it was fully finished. Still cool to see in animatic form, but would be AWESOME to see a fully coloured and animated version.

Good work team. :P

I got a couple of chuckles out of this video, not bad. :P
As well your lip-sync skills are pretty good.
I will suggest a couple of things though that could help improve the quality of future videos, or even this one if you ever decide to remake it.

-Most of the video is reliant on the voice acting and animation to get the joke across, which was still effective enough to work. However adding some simple sound effects for things like yanking the snake out the ear and plopping to the ground will make the video less silent.
-If it weren't for the obvious copyright reasons, and it was a song of your own creation, I would suggest having it playing super quietly while it was still stuck in his head.
-The joke was entirely character centric, but adding in a background sometimes adds to the quality of a video. A room inside a house or walking around town etc.
No marks were deducted from the total score for this reason though.

Keep up the good work and you'll surely improve.
Good luck!

AniMate responds:

Thank you for your helpful comment! I'm still new to animation and these kind of suggestions are exactly what I'm looking for :)

Not bad!
I would suggest when you have characters covering their mouth that you add some additional eye movements to add extra animation to the video.
Keep it up!

I got a few chuckles out of this, not bad. :P
When you're using motion tweens for walking, I would suggest having characters move a bit up and down for every step as opposed to having them make a straight path to their destination. Combine this with some small arm and leg movements and the animation quality will be considerably better. As well for fight scenes, try adding a few more punch sound effects so it doesn't get too repetitive as the fight goes on.
Keep it up. :D

Holy crap! That parachute scene!
Did you have any kind of assistance with that (video reference, rotoscoping), or was that 2000% skill?
Nothing but respect from me. :P

Not bad, it put a smile on my face when the Robot started grooving. :P

The backgrounds...they're...beautiful...0u0
Great work! the animation is fluid and the voice acting is well delivered.

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