Syrupmasterz's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Luigi's Death Stare]

Not bad!
I would suggest if you ever came back to this animation to add a few more character movements. They look a little bit stiff when the camera is on them. Adding a little bit of arm movement when Waluigi is cowering and some blinking when Peach is scared would help contribute to the fear that Luigi's intense stare invokes.

Keep it up! I look forward to the next one. :P

[TF2 - It's Just A Mask!]

FOOL! >:D

Good work! Only thing I could suggest is maybe not tweening the Scout when he faints. Instead maybe have him fall backwards. BUT that's just me.

Good work overall. :P

[DayZ: "Marathon Man"]

From what I've seen of gameplay, this pretty much sums it up. :P
Good work on the animation, only thing I can really suggest is maybe adding a few more details on the trees in the background. (bark details, leaves on the ground etc...)

Keep up the good work!

WooleyWorld responds:

Just you wait. :]

[Polymorph]

Heh, the acceptance at the end.
"You have bested me..."
(SPLAT)

This is pretty good! Some extra animation when the Oasis Snapjaw gets all the buffs would help add to the punchline when it gets polymorphed.
Perhaps if it then stood up, flexed etc... the polymorph would just be that much more funny.

Good work overall! :P

[TMNT - It's just a mask!]

Heheh, the faces that Blastoise makes...:P

This is good! The movement is pretty fluid, only thing that would've made this better is perhaps not using a motion tween when she falls over. Other than that I don't see anything wrong.

Good work!

[Ricks Minecraft Tales 8]

Ha! Blowing on the screen when the character is on fire. :P
Good work animation wise, as well as the lava details.
Only thing I can suggest is maybe adding a few extra details on the intro screen, but then again you WERE going for a goofy image. :P

[Newgrounds game teaser]

I'd play it if it was real. :P

Good work emulating the style of the characters, that probably took a while. The only thing I can suggest adding would be adding smash sound effects when the ending text landed to make it seem more extreme and trailer sounding.

Good work overall!

[Competition Not Combat]

In terms of the message you were going for (making war look stupid, you know...because it is? :P)
it was very clearly portrayed.

In terms of animation a few things could be improved.
Working with a bigger screen size makes the animation look clearer, as working small makes it so details are harder to see.
You could add some extra movement (ducking, peeking over the wall quickly when being fired at, as well as blinking when standing up. Little details like that help to make the movie look nicer)
Adding more frames will help to make movement less choppy and help the animation look smoother.
As well the movement of the soccer players continues even when they've stopped. Going over the keyframes in the animation file will very easily solve this.
Fixing these small problems will result in your next movie being even better.
Good job overall and good luck for next time! :)

["Allen's Dream"]

Not bad! Like you said yourself in the description the ending scene where he quickly wakes up could last for a few extra seconds before fading to a black screen. Just to make the ending less abrupt.

It seems like you were going for a monochromatic colour scheme, so I won't accuse you of not colouring the project.
I can't offer any suggestions in terms of character shading, as it seems you decided not to use any. However the shading you used on the objects in the background were well done and dream-like...which is what I'm sure you were going for.

The line art seems a little bit sketchy, but that may have been an intentional stylistic choice or due to the fact you were trying to get this project done in time. We've all been there at least once. :P
It'd be interesting to see if you ever revisit this piece, overall good work though!

[A Lick to the Past]

I love the timing of the licks, like Link is just waiting for the cue. :P

I'm sure this video was mostly just meant to be as goofy as possible, but one thing that could be improved would be the ground when Link is running through the corridor. Some extra bumps on the side to show some extra movement.

Other than that, nice work!