Syrupmasterz's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dorian's]

Not bad!
Do you draw shadows and highlights in flat colours and then blur them to get the colour transitions you want? Or do you use a different technique?

Just asking 'cuz I like the glowy effect you've got going on here. :P

dogdoujin responds:

Thanks! I used a few different layers here, some shading was done in flats and others were done with an airbrush/blur tool to make it look a little foggy.

[Crystal Kneecapp]

Cave Of The Cyrstal Knee-monchers. :P

In terms of postitioning and composition this looks super good, however one thing kinda stands out to me. (Keeping in mind I'm no expert on anatomy or anything, or what style you're goin' for...) Her legs just seem a wee-bit too long in relation to her torso and head.

Other than that, this is a fine piece you got going on here.
Keep it up! :D

Rocktopus64 responds:

Thank you very much!

Colleen is a really tall girl (she's 6 feet tall), and really skinny. Though thank you for the feedback; I'll make note of it for next time.

[[42] These Happy Days]

Come August I'll be begging for the cold embrace of Winter, Canadians don't do well in the heat...@_@

On an actually artistically relevant to this art piece note, really diggin' your wispy clouds at the top corners and the fade from the blue colours at the forefront to the pinkish purples towards the horizon. : D

Precipitation24 responds:

Thank you!!

[Valley]

That golden tree lighting and shadows, that's the best part of a hike sometimes to see that stuff. Great work emulating it man! You got some cool SNES vibes going on with this piece. :P

Kldpxl responds:

Thank you!

[Deltamon]

Hell yeah! Deltamon is one of my favorite mons. :P
Good work with the colouring and the shading, but I think with ever so slightly darker shading on the robot arm and another shine or two would help it look more metallic.

Keep up the good work!

TylerGrendel responds:

Thanks for the feedback! This was my first attempt at actually using shading brushes and I can definitely agree with that.

[Winter]

This is a 'cool' drawing you got here. :P
I like how you get the clouds to fade into the light the closer they are to the sun hidden behind and the detail of the sloped road.

Did you use reference at all or do you just have a lot of practice under your belt?

Diverart responds:

Like 10 references haha, and a lot of composition techniques

[Chinatown 20XX]

This must have taken FOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEVVVVVVVVVEEEER! @_@
Seriously, I sometimes use Sketch-Up to mock up backgrounds and it takes ages, and I'm not even texturing anything! :P

Great work, I'm interested to see the finished result. :)

Kel-chan responds:

sketchup, autodesk are awesome....It took like a day just to convert some pieces into direct x format so i could play with them. The telephone poles were like 63MB

[Space Worm]

You tried using thick black lines for the globe and thin lines for the worm?
Sometimes a little line variation helps differ the characters and backgrounds enough to keep lines. Otherwise I'd just say experiment with colour.

DoodlingHitman responds:

A bit, but I just couldn't get it to look right, somehow. Line thickness is difficult. At the moment I just pick a size for my brush and draw with that all the time. Pressure makes a difference though. If I try to draw thinner lines here and thicker lines there, it turns out ugly. I dunno why. I usually go thinner when a line is ending.

Color is truly not my thing. I should check out some tutorials since I am not really getting anywhere with my own experimentation. Maybe it's also because I don't quite get the shadowing/lighting right. :/

Ah well, just gotta keep trying. :]

[Christmas 2017]

Murry' Christmas my dude! :P

It all looks good but I think maybe shading the tree the same way the other characters are shaded would make it fit better into the scene.

...Unless of course it's made of cardboard in which case I take it back...haha

DoodlingHitman responds:

Perhaps you're right. I feel like I can't nail backgrounds. I did it with a worms comic where I used black lines for background and color like I did for the characters.

It didn't look good, but I think I am just doing it wrong. I need to find a style for those.

Merry Christmas however! I can still say it because we celebrate a 2nd Christmas day here, lol. :)

[Wendys]

I don't know why, but your style somehow works perfectly for sassy Wendy. :P

On a side note, I really enjoy how with your drawings you colour the lineart based on the darkness/lightness of the shades within the lines. It really makes it pop out. :)

HassySoda responds:

Ahaha yeah that's a thing my friend taught me how to do and it's useful though can be tedious depending on how much work you're doing.